Post by Hawkie <3 on Feb 14, 2009 1:46:04 GMT -6
Name:
Ocean Storm
Age:
28 moons
Rank:
Sharpclaw
Gender:
She-cat
Picture:
Appearance:
Ocean Storm is a small, dainty silver/grey tabby. Her stripes, which are more like rings, are placed everywhere around her skinny body except around her muzzle and eyes where they are less common. She has longer legs then most cats, giving her an advantage in hunting and running. Ocean Storm also has a rather long tail which is her pride and joy. Her paws are large and light and she is extremely skinny all year round, a disavantage at some points. She has a splotch of very light white on her belly.
Ocean Storm has golden amber eyes. They are large and calm but when she is happy, they glitter like the stars. She has a triangler face, mainly because of her young age and has a pink nose. Ocean Storm's neck is shorter than most necks, so she often gets throbbing pain in her neck. Her chest fur is long and well-groomed like the rest of the fur on her body. She is short-haired.
History:
Ocean Storm's mother was a tabby, like herself, but brown with a white belly and paws. She had blue eyes and was blind. Her father was solid silver/grey and muscular. He had amber eyes. Ocean Storm had two siblings, both male. She was the youngest, her two brothers were brown like their mother and they were born in Leafbare.
Ocean Storm was always a kind, level-headed kit from the day she was born. While her brothers tackled eachother, she would sit outside the nursery, smelling the beautiful smells of freshly caught prey. Her mother died when Ocean Storm was a few days old because of greencough. Ocean Storm often started to cry whenever her mother's name was mentioned as she usually over-reacted. Ther father became depressed and often forgot to visit them, making the three young kits feel left out and forgotten. Ocean Storm was taken in by a kind queen but her brothers died of the same disease their mother had. Unlike most kits, who would be angry and upset if their only siblings died, Ocean Storm didn't know them very well and often pondered on why she didn't cry about them as much as she did with her mother. Ocean Storm would sit by herself, feeling lonely and sad. She soon forgot about her father, because of the small amount of times he would speak to her or look at her, and brothers and grew quickly.
When Ocean Storm was made a CIT, she often trained with a tom a little older than her. He liked her, she liked him. Sometimes, she would pretend to go out trainning with him and instead, share tongues with him or share prey. She was trained very well by a senior sharpclaw. As she neared the end of her time as a CIT, many sharpclaws were killed by monsters. She would often think it was her fault and become depressed. When she became a sharpclaw, her forgotten father died of old age and Ocean Storm told the sharpclaw who had trained her that she loved him. They would hunt together and do everything together until the tom started to like another female. Ocean Storm was annoyed and she would often sit by a dead tree and bite into the bark or claw at it. She soon got over it and the tom died, killed by a badger. Many thought this would depress her because of the reputation she had for being the depressed she-cat but she didn't seem to care. Ocean Storm had got over the depression that she would often feel and got on with her life instead of feeling sad all the time like she used to.
Other: I hope that's better! ^^
Dying Eagle Edit: Her power has been purchased and is, "Able to make storms."
Ocean Storm
Age:
28 moons
Rank:
Sharpclaw
Gender:
She-cat
Picture:
Appearance:
Ocean Storm is a small, dainty silver/grey tabby. Her stripes, which are more like rings, are placed everywhere around her skinny body except around her muzzle and eyes where they are less common. She has longer legs then most cats, giving her an advantage in hunting and running. Ocean Storm also has a rather long tail which is her pride and joy. Her paws are large and light and she is extremely skinny all year round, a disavantage at some points. She has a splotch of very light white on her belly.
Ocean Storm has golden amber eyes. They are large and calm but when she is happy, they glitter like the stars. She has a triangler face, mainly because of her young age and has a pink nose. Ocean Storm's neck is shorter than most necks, so she often gets throbbing pain in her neck. Her chest fur is long and well-groomed like the rest of the fur on her body. She is short-haired.
History:
Ocean Storm's mother was a tabby, like herself, but brown with a white belly and paws. She had blue eyes and was blind. Her father was solid silver/grey and muscular. He had amber eyes. Ocean Storm had two siblings, both male. She was the youngest, her two brothers were brown like their mother and they were born in Leafbare.
Ocean Storm was always a kind, level-headed kit from the day she was born. While her brothers tackled eachother, she would sit outside the nursery, smelling the beautiful smells of freshly caught prey. Her mother died when Ocean Storm was a few days old because of greencough. Ocean Storm often started to cry whenever her mother's name was mentioned as she usually over-reacted. Ther father became depressed and often forgot to visit them, making the three young kits feel left out and forgotten. Ocean Storm was taken in by a kind queen but her brothers died of the same disease their mother had. Unlike most kits, who would be angry and upset if their only siblings died, Ocean Storm didn't know them very well and often pondered on why she didn't cry about them as much as she did with her mother. Ocean Storm would sit by herself, feeling lonely and sad. She soon forgot about her father, because of the small amount of times he would speak to her or look at her, and brothers and grew quickly.
When Ocean Storm was made a CIT, she often trained with a tom a little older than her. He liked her, she liked him. Sometimes, she would pretend to go out trainning with him and instead, share tongues with him or share prey. She was trained very well by a senior sharpclaw. As she neared the end of her time as a CIT, many sharpclaws were killed by monsters. She would often think it was her fault and become depressed. When she became a sharpclaw, her forgotten father died of old age and Ocean Storm told the sharpclaw who had trained her that she loved him. They would hunt together and do everything together until the tom started to like another female. Ocean Storm was annoyed and she would often sit by a dead tree and bite into the bark or claw at it. She soon got over it and the tom died, killed by a badger. Many thought this would depress her because of the reputation she had for being the depressed she-cat but she didn't seem to care. Ocean Storm had got over the depression that she would often feel and got on with her life instead of feeling sad all the time like she used to.
Other: I hope that's better! ^^
Dying Eagle Edit: Her power has been purchased and is, "Able to make storms."
