Post by Hawkie <3 on Sept 23, 2009 16:54:24 GMT -6
Name: Thunder
Age: 29 moons
Rank: Loner
Gender: Tom
Picture: Click
*Except he has more scars and a black nose.
*Two deeper yellow stripes on the base of his tail
Appearance: Thunder is a large bulky tom. He is rather muscular, especially his legs. He has a short tail, which, for a short-haired tomcat, is quite fluffy. He has one ear shaped like a 'v' and the other has it's top ripped off. He has scars across his stomach, legs and face. One eye has a deep cut above it.
He is a very pale ginger colour, sort of like a sandy yellow. He has two deep yellow tabby-like stripes at the base of his tail which stretch from hip to hip. His eyes are a deep amber. They sometimes seem yellowish green in bright light. His pawpads and nose are black, with pinkish dappling on his paw pads. The tips of Thunder's front paws are white.
History: He was born with the Ancients, his mother and father were especially proud of him, as he was the only kit in his litter. He was a calm cat from the start, he didn't like to pick fights. He heard stories about the feirce sharpclaws and decided that's what his life dream was to be. A sharpclaw. As his day to become a CIT grew near, he became excited, his parents were finally alive with excitement. That day of his cerimony, Silent came.
He met this she-cat, Silent, at the day of his cerimony. It turned out that she was going to become a CIT with him. "Whispering Silence" was her new name. He introduced himself to her.
"I'm Crackling Lightning," was what he said. He was Crackling Lightning at the time. They became best of friends, he was like a brother to her. He excitedly showed her to all the places he had been to as a kit with his family. They trainned together and everything. Until something horrible happened.
They were out by the Death Fall, dared to go there by the other CITs. Crackling Lightning was showing off how he could walk along the edge of the rim around the old badgers' 'camp'. Another CIT, who had came with them, also played along the edge. They play fought for a little while. Crackling Lightning could tell Whispering Silence was getting worried, but he continued playing. He loved to play, even though he was a calm cat. Suddenly, Crackling Lightning and the other CIT tumbled off the edge of the Death Fall while fighting. They crashed to the ground, Crackling Lightning was on top of the other CIT, so the CIT broke his fall. He could hear the CIT's neck break as his head collided with the ground. He was knocked out, but not dead like the other CIT.
He woke up a few days later, he saw the CIT and realised what had happened. He looked up at the edge where they had fallen, Whispering Silence wasn't there. He began to wash all the blood off himself. What had he done? He had not payed attention when he felt Whispering Silence's worried gaze watch him show off and tackle his fellow CIT. Worried of what the other Ancients would think, he ran off and became a loner. He changed his name to Thunder and still watches Whispering Silence, now Broken Silence. from a distance.
Other: Nothing, but Eagle, if you find something wrong with this, I won't be surprised. xD
Age: 29 moons
Rank: Loner
Gender: Tom
Picture: Click
*Except he has more scars and a black nose.
*Two deeper yellow stripes on the base of his tail
Appearance: Thunder is a large bulky tom. He is rather muscular, especially his legs. He has a short tail, which, for a short-haired tomcat, is quite fluffy. He has one ear shaped like a 'v' and the other has it's top ripped off. He has scars across his stomach, legs and face. One eye has a deep cut above it.
He is a very pale ginger colour, sort of like a sandy yellow. He has two deep yellow tabby-like stripes at the base of his tail which stretch from hip to hip. His eyes are a deep amber. They sometimes seem yellowish green in bright light. His pawpads and nose are black, with pinkish dappling on his paw pads. The tips of Thunder's front paws are white.
History: He was born with the Ancients, his mother and father were especially proud of him, as he was the only kit in his litter. He was a calm cat from the start, he didn't like to pick fights. He heard stories about the feirce sharpclaws and decided that's what his life dream was to be. A sharpclaw. As his day to become a CIT grew near, he became excited, his parents were finally alive with excitement. That day of his cerimony, Silent came.
He met this she-cat, Silent, at the day of his cerimony. It turned out that she was going to become a CIT with him. "Whispering Silence" was her new name. He introduced himself to her.
"I'm Crackling Lightning," was what he said. He was Crackling Lightning at the time. They became best of friends, he was like a brother to her. He excitedly showed her to all the places he had been to as a kit with his family. They trainned together and everything. Until something horrible happened.
They were out by the Death Fall, dared to go there by the other CITs. Crackling Lightning was showing off how he could walk along the edge of the rim around the old badgers' 'camp'. Another CIT, who had came with them, also played along the edge. They play fought for a little while. Crackling Lightning could tell Whispering Silence was getting worried, but he continued playing. He loved to play, even though he was a calm cat. Suddenly, Crackling Lightning and the other CIT tumbled off the edge of the Death Fall while fighting. They crashed to the ground, Crackling Lightning was on top of the other CIT, so the CIT broke his fall. He could hear the CIT's neck break as his head collided with the ground. He was knocked out, but not dead like the other CIT.
He woke up a few days later, he saw the CIT and realised what had happened. He looked up at the edge where they had fallen, Whispering Silence wasn't there. He began to wash all the blood off himself. What had he done? He had not payed attention when he felt Whispering Silence's worried gaze watch him show off and tackle his fellow CIT. Worried of what the other Ancients would think, he ran off and became a loner. He changed his name to Thunder and still watches Whispering Silence, now Broken Silence. from a distance.
Other: Nothing, but Eagle, if you find something wrong with this, I won't be surprised. xD
